Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Mid-term Writing Test

Introduction


Having a good sex life is one thing that everyone wishes to achieve with a partner. Everybody wants to be satisfied sexually. But sometimes when people aren't with someone some of them usually satisfied themselves with pornography. Is it normal to watch pornography? With my english classmates we decided to do a survey on pornography. Our method is based on questions that will help us find out if our hypothesis is right or wrong. We wanted to know if college boys think that pornography is normal and that girls think that pornography is harmful.


Method


First of all our methods were quite simple. We asked easy question such as “yes or no” questions. These questions we’re very useful to help us discover our hypothesis. We also asked people their point of view on what is pornography according to them. Moreover we invited them to tell us their opinion on if it was normal that people watch pornography and they had to explain why they we’re thinking that way. We wanted as well know if college students were open-minded or close-minded talking about pornography with others people like parents, friends and partners. This issue really gave us a good idea of our hypothesis because it reveals if they’re comfortable with this particular subject. Another amusing question we posed was if they caught someone watching pornography how they would react. Therefore these were all interesting questions we had to ask to help us get our answer to our hypothesis.


Results


With all our questions related to our supposition we were able to respond to our hypothesis. It was incorrect because we noticed that girls think that it’s typical too to watch pornography. However when we asked the girls if it’s normal the only thing they didn’t understand is why people are watching pornography. But girls say that there’s nothing wrong with watching pornography. Besides most of the female students we’re open-minded talking porno with people (partners, friends) and even some of them we’re indifferent discussing this topic with their parents. Nearly everyone – including boys – would be ease to watch pornography with their love partners. In addition, before we could guess our final answer, one particularly helpful question was if they would judge someone that watches pornography and the majority of both sex said they wouldn’t.


Conclusion


Finally most of the college students thought that watching pornography it’s ordinary. It is something usual that everyone – at least once in their life – would experiment. Nonetheless if it becomes an obsession and frequently consumed well now it is a problem.


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  1. Having a good sex life is one thing that everyone wishes to achieve with a partner. (23) Everybody wants to be satisfied sexually. But (9) sometimes when people aren't with someone some of them (17) usually satisfied (11) themselves with pornography. (23) Is it normal to watch pornography? With my english (25) classmates we decided (19) to do a survey on pornography. Our method is (11) based on questions that will (11) help us find out if our hypothesis is (11) right or wrong. We wanted to know if college boys think (11) that pornography is (11) normal and that girls think (11) that pornography is harmful. (23, 2)

    Method

    First of all our methods were quite simple. We asked easy question such as “yes or no” questions. These questions we’re very useful to (18) help (16) us discover our hypothesis. (18, 23) We also asked people their point of view (17) on what is (11) pornography according to them. (19, 23) Moreover we invited them to tell us their opinion on if it was normal that people watch (10) pornography and they had to explain why they we’re thinking (11) that way. We wanted as well (19) know if college students were open-minded or close-minded talking about (23) pornography with others (14) people like parents, friends and partners. This issue really gave us a good idea of our hypothesis (18) because it reveals (18, 10) if they’re (11) comfortable with this particular (17) subject. Another amusing question we posed was if they caught someone watching pornography how they would react. (23) Therefore (17) these were all interesting questions we had to ask to help us get our (15) answer to our hypothesis. (23)

    Results

    With all our questions related to our supposition (17) we were able to respond to our hypothesis. (18, 23) It was incorrect because we noticed (18) that girls think (11) that it’s (11) typical (18) too to watch pornography. However when we asked the girls if it’s (11) normal the only thing they didn’t understand is (11) why people are watching (10) pornography. (23) But (9) girls say (11) that there’s (11) nothing wrong with watching pornography. Besides most of the female students we’re open-minded talking porno (23) with people (partners, friends) and even some of them we’re (22) indifferent discussing this topic (17) with their parents. Nearly everyone – including boys – would be (18) ease (18) to (17) watch (16) pornography with their love (17) partners. In addition, before we could guess our final answer, one particularly helpful question was if they would judge someone that watches pornography and the majority of both sex (14) said they wouldn’t. (23)

    Conclusion

    Finally most of the college students thought that watching pornography it’s (11) ordinary (18). It is (11) something usual (18) that everyone – at least once in their life – would experiment (18). Nonetheless if it becomes an obsession and frequently consumed (18, 23) well now (18) it is a problem. (23)

    Grammar: 11/25
    Syntax: 8/25
    Content: 22/25
    Rhetoric: 22/25
    Total: 63/100
    426 Words

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